“Twilit” has potential, but needs work

Plays thru October 30, 2010

WEST JORDAN — Every once in a while I attend a show that I just can’t get into even though much of the audience loves it.  Poison Ivy Mysteries latest production fell flat for me.  Even though all of the talent involved showed a lot of promise, a few key elements made for an evening that did not meet my expectations.Twilit and the Full-Blooded Princess follows the standard murder-mystery-dinner-theatre format we’ve seen in Utah: characters interact with the audience before the show and during dinner, show starts, someone dies, audience is left to interrogate the characters and submit their guesses, murderer is revealed and everyone goes home.

Now, I know I rushed through that bit, and I want to make sure I convey how fun a night of murder-mystery-musical-dinner theatre can be.  There is potential for a riotous evening (the good kind) that you won’t soon forget.

The format of the evening seemed off.  After a solid 30 minutes of waiting for dinner or the show to begin, our host Edward (of Twilight fame) welcomed the audience and introduced us to his bride Bella.  A nice little musical number later and the show was then placed on pause for everyone to shuffle through the buffet line and enjoy some great BBQ at their tables.

I say the show was placed on pause because that’s really the abrupt feeling I had.  During dinner the lights came up, characters helped serve the food, and the show didn’t really continue again till one hour later when the last of the audience members had finished their meals.  Here we are 90 minutes into the evening and we still haven’t really started the story and now I have a bellyful of vittles coaxing me to finish the evening for a good night’s rest.

The script is clever.  There are a lot of details that could make for some good comedy, unfortunately I had a lot of difficulty hearing the actors—not for lack of a sound system, but more due to lack of enunciation by the actors.  I thought they did an excellent job with their characters.  They were fun to watch when the pacing moved well.  Particularly fun—though odd—was the dance off between Jacob (the werewolf) and Ron Weasley.

There is humor there, but I don’t think the actors trust the script enough yet.  By that I mean that instead of indicating they’re saying something funny, it would do them well to play through the jokes and let the humor of the show naturally tickle the audience.

The most enjoyable part of the evening was the original music written by Nate Drew and Jeff Parks.  That is a key trait of Poison Ivy that I love.  All of their work (script & score) is original.  Even though the night’s production didn’t connect well with me, I deeply respect the amount of work that went into the production and the dedication of the cast and production staff to put this show together.

If Poison Ivy can iron out the logistics of dinner, clean up the pacing during the show, and trust the humor of the script, I think there are the makings for a real quality evening.  As it stands right now, this is not my idea of a good show, despite the overwhelming audience response that disagrees with me.

Twilit and the Full Blooded Princess is produced by Poison Ivy Mysteries and plays at the Jordanelle Reception Center (2295 W. Sugar Factory Road, West Jordan) at 7 PM on October 2, 8, 15, 16, 22, 29, and 30.  Tickets are $15 (without dinner) or $25 (with dinner).  For more details, please visit www.poisonivymysteries.com.

About Dave Mortensen

Dave is an independent producer, and advocate for Utah theater, based in Salt Lake City. He holds a BA in Theatre Studies from Brigham Young University with an emphasis in directing and dramaturgy. Dave is a co-founder of Mortal Fools Theatre Project in Provo, and the founder of UtahTheaterBloggers.com. By day, Dave can be found working for a software company helping businesses go paperless.

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  • http://www.poisonivymysteries.com Annelise Murphy

    Dave…I was getting pretty scared that your review was going to be awful. My fears were not realized. I agree that we need to figure out a way to streamline dinner. Also, working on a more efficient way to get people through the door (and what to do about the guests on the list that show up pretty late…need to not be as nice?) We have not dealt with such a large capacity of people in the past. Murder Mystery is an interesting beast in itself. It is NOT legitimate theatre as in the sense that you come, sit down and watch a show. In fact, I like to view it more as a game…somewhere between LARP (live action role playing) and regular theatre (sit down and watch a show). It doesn’t have a flow (per se) and is meant to be viewed as if the audience members are actually guests at a party or convention (or whatever the scenario presents itself). If the audience comes with the mindset that they are at a party thrown by Bella and Edward then they can immerse themselves in talking to the characters as they come around to their tables. They can be entertained by the actors as they are standing in line to get their dinner and they can actually joke, talk and mingle with the actors. It has been quite a challenge to figure out a way to educate people as to what Murder Mystery actually is. It has a pretty bad rap in some circles and I understand why. We are trying to take it out of the cheesy and make it more of an experience by trying to keep the comedy within the world of the play that was created. I am glad to hear that you enjoyed the original music and script. We do work very hard to put it all together as every show is from scratch and sometimes put together in less than 2 months. Oh, one more thing about Twilit and the Full Blooded Princess…this show is a parody show that is meant for audiences that have a bit of understanding of Twilight and Harry Potter, therefore, it has elements that we don’t usually have in the shows because we are playing to the popular culture niche of the time. We tried to make it enjoyable for those that both love and despise Twilight (especially) and it might be my fault (as director) that the actors didn’t quite know how to go with that. Thanks for coming and even though I am saddened that you did not have the best time, I am glad to hear that you can see what we are trying to accomplish…and for providing a forum for discussion and explanation.
    Annelise Murphy

    • http://www.davemortensen.com Dave Mortensen

      Thanks, Annalise. I really appreciate your feedback. It’s always difficult to respond to a show that just you just don’t connect with, but I can definitely recognize the work and talent that has gone into your production. The format of the evening seemed like the key element that needed to be addressed and that’s exciting to hear that thought has gone into fixing that. I’m thrilled that Poison Ivy has been receiving such large audiences with this show and I’m excited to see what your theatre company offers in the future. Thanks again for inviting the UTBA to your production!

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_MT7M6XW3DYR47XZBKIJPKLBKN4 George

    I attended this on the 8th and they have definitely ironed out any kinks in the process. Dinner was served right as you entered and the show started 30 minutes after dinner. The process felt streamlined and there wasn’t any lag. I thought the show was very entertaining and funny. It was a great date night activity.

    • http://www.davemortensen.com Dave Mortensen

      That’s fantastic, George. The format of the evening was the most off-putting element for me, so I’m glad that it has tightened. No doubt it’s shaped up to a fantastic date night activity.

  • Anonymous

    Honestly this was the worst thing I’ve ever been to in my life. I was so distracted with the background I couldn’t even pay attention to the performance. The acting and singing was mediocre at best and I was so baffled with the dance off I couldn’t tell if Jacob was trying to be serious or not. My advice would be to put some money in creating a better ambiance, so the audience has a better feel for theme. Garbage cans, stacked chairs, and some weird reception piece does not cut it for the backdrop.

    • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_B45QQYWDQIPG553TXB7ZN74EQE Morgan

      I wish people would use names. It adds credibility to the comment.

      Everything in the reception center is that way for a reason – the chairs, garbage cans, etc. The place is supposed to look like an old castle for heaven’s sake. I perfectly understood the dance off – it was supposed to be serious for Jacob, and funny for Ron. I thought the place looked just like an old castle. Wasn’t disappointed in my experience at all.

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_B45QQYWDQIPG553TXB7ZN74EQE Morgan

        Looks like “Anonymous” has added his name. Thank you D!